Pottergirl




First vote: 4th Poem
Why: I really like the rythm your poem has. It expresses the almost frantic dance movements I can see in my mind. By reading your poem aloud I almost felt the beat myself. Really good job.

Second vote: 6th Poem
Why: The Shakespearian way of writing is a strong point of this poem. I like the way you broke off the sentences and the usages of the word 'Thou'. It adds a really poetic atmosphere to the story you're telling.

Third vote: 7th Poem
Why: When I started to read this poem, I was actually a little disappointed because there were a couple of spelling mistakes in it that could've been avoided. But then I read the last stanza. No spelling mistakes, and the rythm was just perfect. So, just because the last stanza is brilliant, my third vote goes to this poem.


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