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BerichtGeplaatst: Zo Apr 09, 2006 21:20 Terug naar boven Sla dit bericht op

Hey everbody who's reading this. I posted this once on an other fanfic site and they loved it. Let me know what you think of it.


Ginny Weasley and the Man who defeated Voldemort


“Miss Weasley! Hailly threw a snowball in my face!” a little grill whined.
“Tamara, it was probably an accident,” Ginny Weasley said, “now, lets get inside.”
Ginny worked at a orphanage for children of an age of 6 till 11 after she graduated. She was loved by all the children and maybe not alone the children.

When the weekend started, Ginny walked through the snow in the streets of Hogsmeade, where the orphanage was located. Suddenly a snowball knocked her of her feet and she lost balance.
“Can I help you?” asked a sweet voice of a young man. He held his hand out. She took it and he pulled her on her feet. Somehow she recognized the voice.
“Have you hurt yourself, Gin?” asked the man. Ginny looked surprised at him.
“How do you know my na- Harry?” Harry laughed sweetly at her.
“I guess you know the answer already,” he said with a smirk, when Ginny pulled him in a huge hug.
“It's so long ago, that I've seen you,” she said, “would you like to drink something in the Three Broomsticks?” Harry nodded and they walked to the pub.
“So, what have you been doing for so long?” Ginny asked.
“I'm an Auror,” Harry explained, “And you?”
“I work at an orphanage.”
“Really, the one here in Hogsmeade?”
“Yes, after the war, many children had lost their parents, so they built an orphanage here.”
“Those children are lucky to have you. I'm glad they don't send the children to horrible relatives.”
They walked the Three Broomsticks in and sat down at a table.
“You know, it's great to see you again,” Harry said, “I only had contact with Ron and Hermione.”
“Well, I stay in the orphanage during the week sometimes also in the weekend. So I don't see my family often.”
“You don't get any visitors?” Harry wondered.
“It's allowed, but no I don't get visitors.”
“Well, it's better than a bunch of fan girls anyway,” Harry said. Ginny grinned.
“Still? What do they want from you actually?”
“To date them and marry them.”
“You're not even married?” Ginny asked surprised.
“Are you? I don't even have a girlfriend.”
“Why not?”
“They just want me for my money or because I'm the famous Harry Potter, not just Harry.”
“Oh well, you've got time.”

A couple of hours later they left the pub.
“It was nice to see you, Harry. We should do that again. I really had a great time.”
“I had a great time too. We'll see each other soon,” he said and he kissed her cheek friendly. After that he disapparated.

Two weeks later, Ginny was in the orphanage. She was outside while the children played in the snow. Suddenly a boy ran toward her.
“Miss Weasley! Miss Weasley! There's a visitor!” the boy said enthusiastically and he pointed at a person behind him. Ginny looked.
“Harry? What are you doing here?” she asked surprised.
“Visiting you of course,” he answered. The other children stopped playing and ran toward them.
“Er- Children, I would like you to meet Harry.” The children stared at him.
“Are you Harry Potter?” they asked eagerly. Harry smirked.
“Yes, I believe I'm.”
“Wicked!” a couple of children said.
“Please children-”
“No, it's okay,” Harry said with a smile. He looked at a little girl.
“What's your name?” he asked kindly.
“Mary,” said the girl embarrassed.
“And Mary, do you like Miss Weasley?” Mary nodded. Harrry laughed and turned to Ginny.
“I was wondering, if you have some free time today.”
“Yes, after 6 'o clock, why?”
“What would you say to a diner at 7 'o clock?”
“I'd like that!” Ginny said enthusiastically.
“Great, I'll pick you up at six here!” said Harry, he kissed her hasty on the cheek and walked of. Ginny blushed.
“Are you in love with Harry Potter, Miss Weasley?”
“Do you fancy him?”
“No, he's just a good friend,” Ginny explained.
“Why do you blush then?”

At 6 'o clock Harry appeared at the orphanage.
“Miss Weasley said she would be here in a couple of minutes,” a girl said.
“Then I guess I've to wait.”
“Do you like her?” the girl asked eagerly. Harry raised his eyebrows.
“Well yes, I do.”
“She fancies you, you know that?”
“Has she told you?” Harry asked kindly.
“No, but you can see it by the way she looks at you.” At that moment Ginny arrived.

Ginny and Harry were sitting in a lovely restaurant. They were talking and having a lot of fun together. They already finished their meals and were about to leave. Harry offered her an arm and they walked out of the restaurant.
“Would you like me to walk you home?” Harry asked. Ginny nodded. They walked threw the streets in Hogsmeade. When they arrived at the orphanage they stopped to say goodbye. They looked in each others eyes and their faces were coming. They touched each others lips and kissed. Inside the building a couple of orphans were giving each other a high five.

That was it.
Reviews? Tips? Please let me know what you think. I already have finished this story and the sequel and the sequel's sequel. So if you want to read more. Review by pb or reaction topic. And I'll update this before you can say 'Quidditch'.
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BerichtGeplaatst: Ma Apr 10, 2006 21:37 Terug naar boven Sla dit bericht op

Well here's the next part. I know some things in this story sound a bit unlogical in the magic world of Harry Potter, but it just was an idea. Anyway tell me what you think.

Ginny and Harry dated a couple of times the next weeks. Harry often visited the orphanage, the children liked it when he was there especially little Mary. She was the youngest of all the orphans.

It was a Thursday, as Harry walked into the orphanage. He saw a child.
“Hi, Where Can I find Ginny?” he asked. The boy looked a little sad.
“She's with Mary, Mary is very sick.” Harry looked worried.
“Where can I find them?” he asked quick.
“Upstairs second room at the left.” Harry ran upstairs and burst into the room.
“Is she alright?” he asked.
“She has high fever, I have to take her to the hospital,” Ginny said with a very worried look.
“I'll come with you!” he said.

A couple of minutes later they were in St Mungo's. The healers had taken Mary with them and Harry and Ginny followed them.
“Has she been feverish lately?” a healer asked.
“Yes, she has, but it definitely turned worser today.”
“Could you two wait outside, we'll inform you soon as we no more.”
“Can't we stay here?” Harry asked.
“No, it's better if you wait outside, so we can do the job quickly.”
Ginny and Harry walked out and waited in the corridor.
“Oh my gosh, how could I let this happen,” Ginny blamed herself.
“Shh Gin, it's not your fault,” Harry said calming her. Ginny began to sob. Harry pulled her in an embrace.

Suddenly the door opened and e healer walked toward them.
“Are you the parents?” he asked.
“No, what's wrong with her?” Ginny asked.
“Look I need to talked to her parents.”
“She doesn't have any, they're killed. She's an orphan.”
“You look after her?”
“Yes, I do.”
“Well this is going to be hard, Mary seems to have cancer-”
“What!” both Ginny and Harry shrieked.
“She has liver cancer, but it's in a early stadium, so we'll be able to heal it. There's only one problem-”
“Money,” Ginny said giving all hope up. The healer nodded quietly.
“I'll pay for the treatment!” Harry said suddenly. Ginny looked like she wanted to protest, but Harry glared at her and she closed her mouth.
“Alright,” the healer said, “over a few minutes you can come in.”

After he was gone Ginny turned to Harry.
“Why did you do that?” she asked.
“Because I know it'll save her life,” he answered.
“How can I ever repay you?”
“You don't have to, because I'm going to adopt her.”

Well that's it. Let me know what you think. React and I'll update right away.
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BerichtGeplaatst: Wo Apr 12, 2006 18:18 Terug naar boven Sla dit bericht op

And hey again,
Here's the next part of Miss Weasley and the Man who defeated Voldemort. I hope you like this part too.

Thanks for the review to Cedric DiggOry.


“You want to adopt her?” Ginny asked surprised.
“Yes, she's a great kid,” Harry answered. The healer came out of the room.
“You can come in now,” he said. They walked into the room and sat down in the chairs beside the bed.
“When will I be better?” Mary asked.
“We don't know, you're very sick. I hope you'll be better soon,” Ginny said.
“I personally will take care that they heal you as soon as possible. And when you're better I would like to adopt you so you can come and live with me,” Harry said.
“Adopt me?”
“Yes- well- if you want me to adopt you.” The girl nodded hastily.
“Will you be like a daddy to me then?”
“Well yes, I think so. If you would like that, but first you have to become better.” The girl nodded again, she closed her eyes and drifted of in a peaceful sleep. Harry covered her with the sheet. Ginny looked at him. 'He would make a great father,' she thought. Harry turned around and looked in her face.
“I think you should better go back to the orphanage,” he said. Ginny nodded and kissed Harry.
“Promise me you'll take care of her,” she said.
“I will, I promise you that. Now you should go,” Harry said. Ginny looked one more time to Mary and then she left the room.


Later that eve, Harry went back to the orphanage. Ginny had been waiting for him and ran toward him.
“How is she?” she asked worried.
“She was still asleep when I left,” Harry explained.
“I'm scared, Harry.”
“Shh, she'll be alright.”
“How can you be so certain?”
“I don't know, I just can feel it.”

A week later, Ginny and Harry went to St Mungo's to pick up Mary. The healers had treated Mary and she was a lot better now.
“Ah Potter, Weasley, I guess you're here to pick up the girl.” The both nodded.
“I'm glad to tell you that we'll be able to destroy the cancer completely. She has to take one of these potions each day and she has to come every week here for her treatment,” the healer explained, “the potion will also take over the functions of her immune system so she won't become sick anymore.”
“And how long will it take?” Harry asked.
“It depends, maybe a month, perhaps a year or even more.” They walked into the room.
“Hi Mary, how are you feeling?” the healer asked kindly.
“I feel okay, can I go home now?” The healer nodded.

“A couple of minutes later they walked to the fireplace in the hall of St. Mungo's.
“Are we going to floo to the orphanage?” Mary asked.
“Yes and no, we're going to floo that's right, but we're not going to the orphanage,” Ginny said. Mary looked surprised.
“You're going to stay in Potter's Manor, in Harry's house.
“Indeed, we've decided, that you would stay in Potter's Manor so you could recover completely,” Harry explained.
“Are you going first, Gin?” Ginny nodded and walked into the fireplace. She called 'Potter's Manor' and a moment later she was gone.
“Okay, hold my hand. We've got to floo together.” Mary took Harry's hand and a couple of seconds later they flooed away.

A moment later they stepped out of the fireplace in Harry's living room. Ginny had been waiting for them.
“Merlin, Harry, do you live here alone?” she asked. Harry nodded.
“Where are we anyway?”
“We're in Godric's Hollow,” Harry answered her.
“Godric's Hollow is that not where your parents lived?”
“Yes, it is. This is the place where their house stood. It was destroyed, but I have let it rebuilt.”
“It's beautiful.” Harry smiled.
“And do you like it, Mary?” he asked the little girl. Mary nodded.
“Let's take a look in your bedroom,” Harry said. They walked to the hall and went upstairs.

After they had taken a look in the room, they went back to the living room.
“Are you staying for supper, Gin?”
“No, I have to go back to the orphanage. I'll pass by later this eve.”
“Okay, see you later then, I guess,” he said and pecked her on the cheek. Ginny disapparated and Harry turned to Mary.
“So what do you want to do?” he asked Mary, “do you want to fly broom?” The little girl nodded happily. Harry took his wand out of his pocket.
“Accio Firebolt!” he yelled. A few moments later his broom flew toward him. He held it over his shoulder and they walked to the garden.

So that was it, please review people, give me some hints for the next stories that I (probably) will write. (Well I already am writing them all HPGW stories btw). But I'm open to any suggestions even to requests.
The next part is the last one and then I'm willing to post the sequels to if there are people who want to read them.
Anyway Grtz Jade The Orkkiller




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BerichtGeplaatst: Wo Apr 12, 2006 18:56 Terug naar boven Sla dit bericht op

Thanks to a quick review I'll update this already. It's the end of this story, but sequels can be expected. (since I wrote them already).
Hope you'll like it.


A half hour later they went back into the house.
“Are you hungry?”Mary nodded.
“What would you like to eat?” Potatoes, chicken, fish, rice,sausage, anything you like?” Mary thought before she answered.
“I like sausage with potatoes.” They walked to the kitchen. A house-elf with a weird combination of cloths ran toward them.
“Hello, Harry Potter sir,” the elf said and he bent.
“Hello Dobby, I like you to meet Mary and Mary this is Dobby a good friend.”
“Dobby is honored to meet Miss Mary, Harry Potter has told great things about Miss Mary.” The little girl blushed.
“Dobby, Mary is hungry, she would like to eat sausage and potatoes. Can you manage that?” Dobby bent again and started preparing the meal.

A half hour later they were sitting at the tabble. Harry explained Mary that Dobby was not his servant but that the elf lived with him and if she needed anything when he wasn't there she could go to Dobby.

It was already seven o' clock when they finished supper.
“You can watch telly if you want.”
“Telly?” Harry nodded and picked her up. He walked to the living room and put her back down.
“Look, that's the telly or television,” he explained and he put it on. Mary looked at it with her mouth open.

Mary had fallen asleep, Harry lifted her up and carried her upstairs. When he laid her in bed she suddenly woke up.
“Shh, try to catch some sleep.”
“Can you tell me a story?”
“A story? What story?”
“I've heard that you're famous, tell me why.” Harry smiled.
“When I was one year old, a bad wizard killed my parents-”
“Are you an orphan too?”
“Yes, I'm. My aunt and uncle raised me, but they were very mean. They had a fat son, Dudley ...” Harry continued till Mary had fallen asleep.

Harry walked downstairs. Ginny had flooed over and walked toward him.
“Is she upstairs?” Ginny asked.
“Yes, she sleeps already,” Harry said softly.
“Lisa has taken over from me,” she said.
“You look tired.”
“I haven't slept well since Mary became sick.”
“You need to relax a bit more,” Harry said as he kissed her.
“You're right. I worry to much.” They watched some television and Ginny fell asleep.

Ginny woke up the next morning. She looked around and noticed that this wasn't her bedroom. She stood up and walked out of the rooms. 'Hey wait a minute, this is Harry's house,' she thought. She walked downstairs, when she heard noise in the kitchen. She entered the kitchen and found Harry and Mary having breakfast.
“Hi Gin, did you sleep well?” Harry asked smiling when he saw her.
“Yes- I- er- slept great actually.”
“Yeah you were lying so peaceful at my sofa that I couldn't wake you up, so I brought you up to one of the guest rooms,” Harry explained, “would you like to have breakfast with us?” Ginny nodded and sat down.
“Harry!” a voice from the living room yelled. Harry got up and ran toward the fireplace. Mrs Weasley's head was lying in the fireplace.
“Hi Mrs Weasley, can I help you?” he asked polite.
“Yes, have you seen Ginny? She's not at the orphanage nor at home.”
“She's here, we've been taking care for Mary last night,” Harry explained.
“Oh yes, Ginny told me about her, is she alright?”
“Yes, or at least she will be with the right treatment.”
“Harry dear what would you say when I invited you, Ginny and Mary for lunch?”
“That would be great!”
“At 12 h 30?”
“Alright, we'll be there.” And with a POP Mrs Weasley's head disappeared. Harry walked back to the kitchen.
“Who was it?” Ginny asked.
“Your mother. She invited us to come over for dinner.”
“Great, now she'll think that we're a couple.”
“Well, is that not true?” Harry asked with a mischievous grin.
“You're a bad boy! Do you know that?”
“Girls like bad boys, so be careful or another girl will have me first,” Harry said and he slung an arm around her.
“And which girl apart from me could that be?”
“Don't worry Gin, you're the only woman in my life ... for the moment.” Ginny hit him playfully and Mary was looking with open eyes to the duo.

At twelve o' clock they went to the Burrow, where they got a warm welcome.
“Harry! Ginny! It's so great to see you both. And you must be Mary. I'm Mrs Weasley, Ginny's mother.” The little girl nodded nervously. Suddenly Fred and George apparated in the kitchen.
“Hi mom,” they both said. Then they saw Harry and Ginny.
“Harry, Ginny, it's so nice to see you guys. It's been so long-” they stopped when they saw Mary.
“Hi Fred, George. This is Mary. We've been taking care for her the last two days.”
“The both of you?” Fred asked eagerly.
“Yes, she stays at Harry's, while I work at the Orphanage.”
“Owh,” said the twin, they looked a bit disappointed.
“Are you two staying for dinner too?” Mrs Weasley asked.
“Yeah, we love your cooking, mom!”
“Stop sliming!” Mrs Weasley said rolling her eyes.

After they had dinner, Fred and George made some jokes to entertain Mary. Mary giggled non-stop till she got tired and fell asleep at the couch.
“I think it's time to go,” Harry said when he picked up Mary. He said goodbye to Mrs Weasely and the twins.
“I'm coming with you,” Ginny said as she got up. The twins suddenly grinned to each other. She kissed her mother and the twins goodbye and then she followed Harry to the fireplace.

A moment later they stepped out the fire in Potter's Manor. They walked upstairs and put Mary in bed.
“Do you want to stay here this night?” Harry asked.
“Thanks Harry, that would be great.”
“Do you have to do anything tomorrow?” he asked.
“No, what do you want to do?”
“I thought we could go to Hogsmeade with Mary.”
“Yeah that would be nice. But if you don't mind I'm going to bed now, I'm really tired.”
“That's okay. Sleep thigh,” he said and he kissed her.
“But actually, I could stay here as well. With nice and handsome company,” she said with a wink. Harry laughed.
“I wouldn't mind Miss Weasley.” They stayed in the living room holding each other company.

Two weeks later Harry came back from work. He walked the living room in and sat down in the sofa next to Mary who was watching telly.
“So Mary what have you and Dobby been doing?”
“We've made a cake on the muggle way. It was fun!” Harry grinned.
“Mary, I've to ask you something,” Harry started and Mary looked at him eagerly.
“What would you say, when Ginny would become your mom?” he aksed.
“Mommy Ginny and daddy Harry!” the girl cheered happily. Harry smiled, that meant definitely 'yes'.
“I want you to paint something for mommy,” Harry said.
“I don't know what to paint.”
“Paint mommy in a beautiful wedding dress .” The girl nodded and ran to Harry's study room.

That evening Ginny stepped out of the fireplace.
“Hi Gin,” Harry said and he kissed her at that moment Mary ran toward Ginny.
“Mommy, mommy! Look what I've drawn!”
“Mommy?” Ginny asked surprised, she took the painting and looked at it. Suddenly she started laughing when she looked up she saw Harry knelled on one knee with a small box in his hand.
“Harry-”
“Ginny, do you want to marry me?”
“Of course I'll!” Ginny said and she embraced Harry. Mary jumped up and down. When they pulled away, they both looked at Mary. Now they would become a happy family and everything would be alright.

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