Poisonous Ally

Lady Quiera · Geplaatst: Za Apr 14, 2007 17:44

Well... this is my story. As the title of this subject says, it's named
"Poisonous Ally".

Disclaimer;
My name is NOT Joanne Rowling nor do I own any of the characters she created. Anything you recognise is not mine. Anything you do NOT recognise is mine, so that means the plot too!

Chapter 1; Alone
Harry Potter, a boy of almost seventeen years old, was sitting in his room at Privet Drive number 4. Harry's emerald green eyes shattered in the light of the lamp that was standing on the table.

Just two weeks ago he saw his mentor die on the top of the Astronomy tower, but he didn't die of old age. No, he was murdered. Albus Dumbledore was murdered by Severus Snape. But the worst thing was that Albus trusted Snape, he was a friend!

Harry had locked himself up for twelve days in a row; he only opened the door for food. He didn't want to see anyone. The only thing he did al those days was reading. He liked to read, especially when it was quiet. He loved to pay his attention to something else than the newspaper that would only bring him most unpleasant news about missing and killed people.

Harry turned the page of his book. "Chapter thirteen," he said, while putting his book down. He stood up and walked to the window hoping it was all a bad dream and Dumbeldore would bring him to the Burrow. But it was all false hope!

"Visitors!", Aunt Petunia screamed from downstairs. The last few weeks she had treated Harry well, she didn't let him do all kinds of stupid things. Actually she was very nice to him.

Harry didn't want to have visitors now, so he locked the door and went back to reading again. He turned his page and while he did, he listened to the people who were heading to his room.

"Oh, Harry, please come out", Hermione begged, "We want to talk to you!" Harry shook his head. He looked at the door. On the other side of it were two of his best friends and not to forget, one of the best friends of his father, they were all trying to help him, but he didn't want them to.

"No, it's hard enough without someone telling me what to do! I won't let you in", Harry said in a almost whinning voice, "Please go!" Harry wasn't in the mood for any visitors no matter whom they were.

"No, we wont go until we had a little chat with you!" Hermione said, "Alohomora". The door of Harry's room clicked open and Hermione, Ron and Remus Lupin were standing behind it.

"I said NO!" Harry shouted, his hand pointing at the door. A flesh of blue light followed and the door was closed again, “I don’t want to!”

“What did you do? How did you do?” Hermione screamed, “You just did wand-less magic!” Hermione was so amazed that she didn’t even remember why they were there.

“I know, I could do it all the time!” Harry was getting angrier, “I could have saved Dumbeldore if I only knew about it!” Harry started to cry. He wished Dumbeldore was still there to help.

“How did you figure it out then?” Lupin said, “You must have done something to discover!” Harry nodded, he did. Harry opened the door with a flick of his hand and Ron, Hermione and Lupin sat down on the bed. They were looking at Harry as they listened to his story.

“I did!” Harry said, “Two weeks ago when I just arrived here, Dudley made me angry. So I pointed my finger at him. I was just that mad and angry. I cursed him by accident. I didn’t know I could do that, I really didn’t know!” Ron laughed a bit but Hermione punched him in his stomach, so he stopped.

“I am sure you didn’t do it on purpose, but I think we should train that ability of yours!” said Lupin in a most friendly way. Harry shook his head; he wouldn’t train it, never.

“No, I won’t train it! It’s a curse,” Harry said, “I could have saved Dumbeldore with it, but I didn’t!” Harry looked at Hermione. He knew she wouldn’t understand, nobody would ever understand his feelings.

“Don’t blame yourself! It’s not your fault!” Lupin said, “Even if you could, Dumbeldore didn’t want you to risk your life for his!” Harry knew that was true, but even if he knew, he wouldn’t agree with it.

“I would really appreciate it if you would just leave!” Harry said opening the door for his friends. Hermione tried to pack his stuff and take them with her so Harry would come too, but he didn’t want to, he wanted to be alone.

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Well... this is the first chapter and I hope you all liked it! I really like getting feedback/reviews. If you want to flame, do so, but build [color=orange]up your arguments well!

This chapter is now beta-read by my beta-reader TONKS! and second beta-read bij Nevodeon

Lady Quiera · Geplaatst: Di Apr 24, 2007 14:58

Well... here is the second chapter of my story and I hope you'll all like it. And as I said I really like getting feedback and reviews.
Thank you Addiie for your positive reaction on my story! I hope you'll keep reading!

Chapter 2; The only way
Harry was sitting two more weeks in his room. He had everything he needed. He had read a lot of books, most of them weren’t intressting but he read them only because he had nothing else to do.

Also had he searched for a solution to defeat Voldemort and his deatheaters. He had found one bur it wasn’t that simple.

“Hedwig!”, Hary screemed and a white snowowl landed on his desk,”I want you to bring a letter to Hermione. Harry grabed a quil and started writting.

Dear Hermione,
You know I can’t go on with my life without feeling guilty. Well, I think I have found the solution to this problem, but there is one other problem I can’t do this alone.
I know you will come with me and so is Ron, but I want you to think about it first. It will be very dangerous and I don’t know if we will survive!
Please don’t do it before you have had a good though about it. Take your time, cause it will be very hard to leave someone you love behind!
Keep that in mind Hermione! I won’t be mad at you if you would rather stay home!

,Harry

Harry closed the envelope en gave it to Hedwig. Hedwig flew out of the window to Hermione. Harry sat down on his bed playing with a little ball wich he had stolen from Dudley. But Dudley didn’t play with it anyway.

Not long after diner, wich was placed in front of the door, a letter arrived. A letter from Hermione. Harry opened the letter and started reading it.

Dear Harry,
I’ve had a little chat with my parents and we agreed, I’m coming with you. Tomorow I’ll come and get you out of there. We’ll get Ron and then go on our mission.
I don’t think Mrs. Weasley would let Ron go so we must go after night the falls and then sneak out of there. I hope Ginny won’t wake up, cause she will propably go with us then.
See you tomorow, don’t worry about me. I would rather stay with you!

,Hermione

Everything was set! They were heading the past tomorow. Then he realized he didn’t even told Hermione what they were going to do. She propably thinks we are heading to find the Horcruxes!

Quick Harry searched for another peace of parchment to explain to Hermione what they were going to do. Finally Harry found another peace of parchment and started to write.

Dear 'Mione,
I haven’t wrote Ron about this all, but there is something else I am worried about is that you think we are going to destroy the Horcruxes, but we are not!
First we have to do something else! It was about time someone would do it!
Anyway sleep well, I will meet you at 4 o’clock at my aunts house!
Get enough sleep!

,Harry

Harry wasn’t planning to go to sleep at all. He had more important things to do. He needed to find out here he could get all the stuff they needed on there rescue mission.

“Visitors!”, Aunt Petunia shouted,”come back down this instance!’ Harry packed his stuff and took a carefull look around. I would propably be the last time in here. He put his stuff down the hall and went into the livingroom.

“Hi Mione”, Harry said,”shall we go then, it’s allready 4 o’clock! We must hurry!” Hermione knodded, and packed her belongens.

“I know it’s hard to leave everyone you love behind, but this time it will be the only way!”, Harry said and he closed the door behind them, then they apperated away from Privet Drive.

Lady Quiera · Geplaatst: Di Jun 05, 2007 20:30

At last a new chapter! I didn't get that many reviews yet so I hope for many more! But here's chappie 3;

Disclaimer;
My name is NOT Joanne Rowling nor do I own any of the characters she created. Anything you recognisze is not mine. Anything you do NOT recognisze is mine, so that means the plot too!

Chapter 3; Find the love within!
“Lets apperate, that’s much quicker than with the Knight Bus!”, Harry said. He packed all his stuff and with a small,’poof’, he disappeared to the Burrow. Hermione did the same and a few moments later they were standing next to the Burrow.

The beautifull landscape streched out before them and the enormous garden was filled with little gnomes that ran around like they were running the marathon. But Harry nor Hermione payed any attention to the landscape or the happy gnomes and walked straight to the hous.

“Let get Ron and then go!”, Harry said and he sneaked closer to the house,”c’mon Hermione! We have to do this quick!” Harry almost dragged Hermione to the door and stopped in front of it. Looking behind him if nobody had seen them.

With a flick of Harry’s hand the door went open and they walked into the house. The livingroom was if possible even tidier then usual. Quickly they walked throuh it. As quiet as possible they went upstairs. Another flick of Harry’s hand and they were in Ron’s room. They walked to the bed atleast Hermione walked to the bed while Harry began packing Ron's belongings.

“C’mon Ron wake up, we have to go!”, Hermione whispered, while she shaked Ron. Harry didn’t want to stay any longer. So he came up with an idea, which would make the Marauders proud.

“Aquamenti”, Harry said and a large amount of water landed in Ron’s face and he woke up,”finally, your up! Now help me get your stuff!”

“What are we going to do then?”, Ron asked, while putting the rest of his stuff together,”never mind, I already know it!” ron trew if bag over his shoulder and so did Harry. All three of them carried a lot of bags. Harry, Ron and Hermione ran down the stairs with the stuff on their backs, but it was a big shock for them to see Remus Lupin standing downstairs.

“I knew you would come here first!”, Lupin said with a little smile,”Now tell me what you are going to do, what are your plans?’ Harry who had recovered from his shock, made up a plan.

“The only thing I can tell you professor is, Nobody may see us!”, Harry raised his hand and maked a difficult movement, then they disappeared.

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“Molly!”, Lupin shouted,”they are gone! Harry, Ron and Hermione! They are gone!” A lot of noise followed, while Mrs. Weasley ran downstairs. It sounded like a herd of elephants hurrying down the stairs, but it didn't matter, she was downstairs.

“They are gone Molly, I couldn’t stop them!”, Remus said, while looking into the face of an very very angry mrs.Weasley.

“YOU WHAT! THEY ARE ONLY TEENAGERS AND 'YOU' COULDN’T STOP THEM?!”, Molly screemed,”You are so unbelieveable!”

“Harry is a lot more powerfull than you think Molly”,Lupin answered, while looking outside for a sign of the three that he wouldn't find.,” he is able to perform wand-less magic at HIS age! He is only seventeen! Dumbeldore couldn't do it at THAT age!”

***

“What did you do?”, Hermione asked,”how did you get us out of there, more importantly were are we?” Hermione looked arund,they seemed to be in a normal muggle street inside a normal muggle village, but they weren't.

Harry looked around and walked further into the street,” I let us vanish an reapear here! A sort of Apperated us here” He walked to a house with was very beautifull. It was covered by a lot of plants and flowers in every color. It seemed like an old farm house, but it wasn’t.

“We are standing next to Dumbeldore’s house!”, Harry said and he walked to the door. He placed his hand on the frontdoor and closed his eyes,”smart, yes very smart, but not smart enough!”

“What are you doing? You are not going to break in, are you?”, Hermione asked, while she looked at Harry with a loads of concern in her beautifull brown eyes.

Slowly Harry took his hand from the front door. He placed his hand on his heart and closed his eyes again. Some kind of white substance covered Harry hand. Harry placed his hand on the door and swept it over the door. The white substance vanished, but a sentence seemed to appear on the door.

“Find the love within, Harry, you need it!”

“Was that a message from Dumbeldore?”, Ron asked with open mouth. Harry knodded and opened the front door. Harry, Ron and Hermione entered the house.

Lady Quiera · Geplaatst: Zo Jul 15, 2007 14:10

My computer has recently creashed so I suppose this is the last chapter you'll see in a while. I still like reviews and I love my reviewers! Rolling Eyes

Here's the next chapter.

Disclaimer;
My name is NOT Joanne Rowling nor do I own any of the characters she created. Anything you recognisze is not mine. Anything you do NOT recognisze is mine, so that means the plot too!

Chapter 4; A wall of knowledge;
“So this is were Dumbeldore lived?”, Hermione said impressed by all the bookcases that were spread over the entire wall,” this was Dumbeldore’s privet library” Hermione walked to one of the bookcases an picked up a book. She whipped the dust of the book with her sleeve.

“And that is exactly what we need!”Harry said,”we only need to find out where he hide it, then our mission begins!” Harry said taking the book from Hermione's hands and putting it back in the bookcases.

“How are we going to find it without being found ourselfs?”, Ron said nevously, he didn’t like the though of his mom being mad at all. Harry walked to Ron and gave him a comforting look.

“Dumbeldore’s greatest weapon was love! So we have to follow our hearts!”, Harry explanned. Harry placed his hand on his heart again and closed his eyes, the white substance surrounded Harry’s hand. Then he opened his eyes and looked at Hermione and Ron, hinting they should do the same.

“We can’t help you with it, cause we can’t do that!”, Hermione said and lay her hand on one of the books again.

“Hold my hand”, Harry said and he gave his hand to Hermione. Harry's hand touched Hermione's and the wite substance slowly began to cover both of their hands. Now Hermione’s hand was covered in white substance too,”C’mon Ron you too!”

A not very believeable Ron gave his hand to Harry and watched how it was covered in white substance. Then Harry felt something strange in his hand but also in his heart.

“Did you feel that?”, Harry asked, while he tried to follow his heart,”Did you also feel that we are not alone!” Harry walked around the room trying to determine where the feeling came from.

“How do you mean, we are not alone?”, Ron asked,”there is no one in here!” Harry shook his head there was definitly someone else in the room too. 'That is what you think', Harry mentally thought.

“Harry, what are you doing?”,Hermione asked, while she looked at Harry. He had lain his hand on one of the bookcases and listend. A rumbling sound apeared and the bookcase moved out of the way.,”how did you do that?”

“I just followed my heart, I let love lead the way”, Harry said like it was normal to find an secret chamber that is hidden behind a bookcase with just love,”C’mon lets go on!”

A moment before they walked into the chamber a beautifull bird came flying down. The birdssong was so catchy that Hermione just closed her eyes to listen to it. The bird was bright red and gold in color and made the most beautiful song they had ever heard.

“Fawkes!”, Harry whispered and let the Phoenix sat on his shoulder,”he is the one who I was feeling!”

“Fawkes has been here for all those weeks, he waited for us! I think Dumbeldore knew that you would come here and so did Fawkes!”, Hermione said and she stroked Fawkes.

“I think you’re right, as usual!”, said Ron, while he walked upstairs. Ron’s mouth felt open while he looked around him. There was a golden teloscope standing in the middle of the room,”Harry I think you might like this!”

Harry ran upstairs and took a closer look of the teloscope, ther was something strange about it,”it is set on my house!”, Harry said,”he watched me all the time!” Harry turned the teloscope at another house and saw it was the Burrow,”Ron look, you can see your mum from here!”

“You’re right, I can!”, said Ron,”she doesn’t look mad rather concearned!” Ron pointed at Lupin who was standing right next to his mom,”but he doesn't look comcearned!” Harry watched at Lupin and saw that Ron was right, Lupin was desperate to find them.

“Should we give them a clue?”, Hermione asked,”they definitly need one!” Harry shook his head as hard as he could.

“I have given them more than enough clues to find and stop us already, no they will find us even without another clue!”, Harry said and he turned the teloscope to Hogwarts then he saw something that he didn’t like,” I think you guys should see this!”

“Should see what?”, Hermione asked,”oh no, this cannot be true!” But what Hermione saw was true a large group of men in black cloakes and wearing masks were heading to Hogwarts,”Deatheaters are attacking Hogwarts, we should go and help!”

“No, if we finish our mission this won’t happen, now find Dumbeldore’s timeturner!” Hermione shook her head, she couldn’t believe it. Hogwarts was and is Harry’s home,“Are you sure we shouldn’t help?”, she asked.

“No. Our mission is more important now!”, Harry said.

Lady Quiera · Geplaatst: Di Nov 06, 2007 15:23

After a very very very etc. long time I post a new chapter as I think it's time I should continue it!

Chapter 5 To the world of Déjà Vu;

“I think there’s another thing you should see too!”, Ron said and he pointed at Remus and his mum and dad,”they're trying to come in!’ On Ron’s face there was deffinitly some fear, well that was not unusual when you had Mrs. Weasley being mad at you.

“If we hurry up we can get out of here before they find us!”, Harry said and he walked to the bookcases and picked some books out of it and putted those in his trunk. It took a while before something new happened.

“They are coming in right now! Should we block them?”, Hermione asked, but Harry shook his head. He looked deep in Hermione’s eyes and then began to talk.

“They are not going to find us in here, well, not until we’re finished, that’s for sure!”, Harry said,”now hurry up we don’t have much time left! I want you to write down all the special things we did last year, my lessons with Dumbeldore etcetera, Ron search our time table and write seven september on a piece of paper, then I will find Dumbeldore’s time turner!”

Ron and Hermione didn’t know why they have to find all these stuff but they went to do it. Harry probably had a very good reason for this all. Harry went searching for the time turner on allmost every single spot in the house, bur he couldn’t find it anywere.

Then when all hope seemed to be lost Harry found it in a pocket of Dumbeldore’favorite robe. He ran to Ron and Hermione, who had finished their jobs and gave them to Harry.

“Ron... Hermione..., this seems the end”, he said almost whispering,”I don’t want you to come with me, cause I don’t know I could handle losing you two... I have to bring Dumbeldore back so he can teach me! Fare well!”

Harry grabbed the timetable and their dutties from last year, which Hermione had written down, and the piece of paper with seven september on it. He wrapped the time turner in the paper and smashed in on the ground.

Ron and Hermione just stood there, still stunned by what Harry had said. In front of them Harry seemed to vanish in dust from the timeturner. Ron and Hermione watched as their best friend said goodbey to them, and maybe forever. They could not let this happen. A nanosecond before Harry vanished they grabbed his legs and vanished too. They were heading back to the world of Déjà Vu.

“Why did you came after me?”, Harry asked as they landed on the floor of some eugh castle, which they recocnished as Hogwarts.

“We came after you because we can’t let you be killed in the past!”, Hermione said and she hugged Harry intensly.

“I don’t get it! Why wouldn't you take us on such a great adventure?”, Ron asked,”you’re deffinitly going to need us this year, or should I say last year!” Ron smiled and so did Harry and Hermione. Harry’s eyes had that little twinkle Ron noticed. He knew that twinkle, it was Dumbeldore’s. Hermione stood back as she noticed that Ron was focused on Harry’s eyes. She pulled Ron’s robe and then pointed at the students that were passing.

“We’re on Hogwarts remember, we can’t be seen!”,Hermione said,”let me transfigure you both!” Hermione pulled her wand out and waited untill the students were gone. She pointed her wand at Ron and mumbeled something they could not hear.

Then Ron’s hair started to change color. From red into dark brown almost black. Also his eye’s were not longer their usual color but now they were somekind of grey. Ron was no longer recocniseable to anyone.

“Well, how do I look?”, Ron asked with a voice that was no longer his own, but a low voice that was more like Moody’s.

“Well, you look great!”, Harry said. He could no longer wait untill it was his turn. Hermione pointed her wand at Harry.

Imediatly his hear changed from black messy hair into red and totally controleable hair that was a little shorter. But there was something wrong, his eye’s weren’t changing. They just stayed there natural color. Not even the smallest change. Hermione fronsed her face.

“What’s wrong, mione?”, Harry asked with a voice that deffinitly had changed, He took his glasses of and noticed that he did not need themanymore ,”don’t I look astonishing without my glasses?!” Hermione nodded.

“You look great, but I can’t change your eyes, but at least you don’t need your glasses anymore!”, Hermione said,”well, we deal with that later! My turn!” Harry pulled his wand out his robe and pointed it at Hermione. Who looked a little more nervous than usual. She looked like she was having an exam.

Harry flicked his wand and Hermione’s hair started to grow fastly. While it grow it turned black and smooth there was no curl in in anymore. Her eyes were now iceblue what looked great with her hair.Hermione pulled a mirror out of her bag and one by one they looked at themselfs.

“Let’s go and see Dumbeldore!”, Harry said,”wait! names!”